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ajoyal
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 Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:47 pm Post subject: Chapter 7 |
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Lots of fun, the relationships keep building.
Of course, this one is reading more and more like the prose version of a comic book, but I think that was your original idea, and you have done a good job of keeping to the plot while dealing with a number of extremely high powered individuals.
Not sure just how arrogant you are going to make your bad guys. At some point they have to realize they are playing a losing wicket and decide to leave the field. Especially against combat machines like Wolf and Quartz. |
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Sylverdyne
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| Quote: | | Not sure just how arrogant you are going to make your bad guys. At some point they have to realize they are playing a losing wicket and decide to leave the field. |
Just to point out, do they still even have that option? I mean, given everything, I think they'll be chased.
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ajoyal
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| Sylverdyne wrote: | | Quote: | | Not sure just how arrogant you are going to make your bad guys. At some point they have to realize they are playing a losing wicket and decide to leave the field. |
Just to point out, do they still even have that option? I mean, given everything, I think they'll be chased. |
touche.
Good point. And considering that your villians are corrupt agents of government I'd expect them to find it a bit difficult to just vanish into the woodwork. However, I figure the minions will eventually fgure out that you can spend a life insurance payout on yourself and get out of the way, leaving just the leaders to face the wrath of the Carmichael twins. |
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